Here's another short essay I did during my days as a Primary Two (8 years old) student at Ngee Ann Primary School . I completed this essay as part of my own exercise to be a better writer. Mind the sign (at the zoo) It was a Thursday afternoon. Jane’s class went on a Learning Journey to the zoo. They first went to the ducklings’ enclosure. They saw six cute ducklings and they were excited. Inside the enclosure, there was a sign that said, “Do not touch”. Jane wanted to touch the ducklings so she ignored the sign. She bent over to touch the ducklings. The ducklings started to quack. After a while, the ducklings’ mother appeared and bit Jane’s hand. Jane shouted in pain. Tears flowed down her cheeks. Mrs. Tan and the zookeeper heard the shout and quickly ran to Jane. They removed her hand from the ducklings’ mother. Mrs. Tan applied cream on Jane’s hand while the zookeeper told her she should not ignore...
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