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Life with Ralf - my pet rat's tale | Essay for 10 year olds | Elijah Wee | Singapore

The following essay "Life with Ralf - my pet rat's tale" was composed when I was ten years old.



         The moment had come.

         As the doors of doom closed, tears fell like arrows of devastation from my mournful chestnut brown eyes. Just then, memories of Ralf like images on a movie reel started playing back in my mind …

         The day had finally arrived.

         A few days earlier, I had managed to persuade Father and Mother into allowing me to adopt a pet from SPCA. Oh, I can still smell the sweet scent of success of my momentous victory over Father and Mother.

         Entering the SPCA, I was met with a blur of animals in their enclosures, from cats lazing around to dogs barking for attention. However, none of the animals caught my fancy at first sight.

         Just then, at the corner of my eye, I spotted Ralf.

         At first when I saw Ralf, it could barely stand up. Then struggling to take a few steps forward, it looked like an old man needing the support of a walking stick. Its body seemed like it was scorched. I simply could not believe my eyes. What had happened to this poor little rat? Asking the SPCA assistant, I found out that Ralf once belonged to a boy who often mistreated it. The boy often forgot to feed Ralf. What made me especially shocked was that the boy had actually used matchsticks to light up Ralf’s once beautiful pristine-white fur, reducing it to its current coal-black charred state. The SPCA assistant added that Ralf faced a possibility of contracting skin cancer. I was totally enraged and shocked when I heard about the boy’s cruel acts. At that moment, my eyes met Ralf’s. Ralf’s eyes appeared to be glowing with hope and anticipation. It seemed to want to get out of there and I could be its one and only savior. Taking pity on Ralf, I made up my mind to keep Ralf as my pet.

         That day marked the beginning of my life with Ralf.

         With proper care and help, Ralf recuperated and was able to scamper around in its cage after several weeks. I was intoxicated with cheer and joy when I saw Ralf returning to health. The days that ensued saw me as cheery as a sunbeam, often playing with Ralf and laughing gaily at its antics. What could possibly go wrong? However, a blissful life for Ralf was not meant to be …

         The sun was scorching hot.

         Despite the immense heat and my heavy school bag, I willed myself to walk briskly back home. I really missed Ralf when I went to school and wanted to make up for “lost time” with it.

         Stepping into my room, where Ralf’s cage was displayed prominently on my mahogany desk, I was puzzled not to see the usually excited Ralf scampering to greet me. Instead, I found it hunched in the far dark corner of its cage. I was concerned. Reaching out gingerly and cuddling Ralf in my hands, I spotted a few large red lumps all over its body. Oh dear, was this a sign of the skin cancer the SPCA assistant had mentioned that Ralf could end up contracting? But it cannot be, can it? Terrible thoughts and fears on what was to come crept into my mind like an insidious snake. To confirm my innermost doubts, I resorted to telling Mother about Ralf’s red lumps. Moments later, Mother and I rushed helter-skelter to the nearby veterinarian, “Vets for Life”.

         To my horror, my utmost fears were confirmed irrevocably. The veterinarian offered me with two options to decide upon. One option was to let Ralf bear with its current agonising pain and suffering until its passing on which could happen in the next couple of weeks. The other was to get done what most pet owners dread to do – to put Ralf to seep. Not an easy decision to make. I chose the latter after a heart-wrangling deliberation. I did not want Ralf to suffer any more.

         With a heavy heart, I stretched my hand gingerly to stroke Ralf. Its glistening eyes appeared sad yet tinged with gratitude – sad to leave us; grateful to me for ending it current agony. Unable to hold back our emotions, Mother and I cried inconsolably, lamenting our impending loss.

         “It’s time,” the kind and compassionate veterinarian, Dr Chan, murmured as he placed his had gently on my right shoulder and motioned for us to leave the room. We cuddled Ralf for the last time, looked deeply into its eyes and mouthed our tearful farewell to Ralf before leaving the room reluctantly.

         To this day, Mother and I could still recall vividly the expression on Ralf’s face – one of relief and peace. Even now, the incident is still etched deeply in my mind and I will often at times look up to the skies and hope that Ralf has found happiness and is resting in peace in the heavens above …

It was indeed a sad day - may Ralf rest in peace. How did you find this story?

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Till the next time,

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