A knock on the door in the middle of the night (Primary 4 essay for 10 year olds by Elijah Wee, Singapore)
Hi there, I will be posting up a number of my recent Primary school essays (from Ngee Ann Primary School as well as those done at home) here in the next couple of weeks. Appreciate your feedback on my stories! Here's the first one from my Primary 4 (10 years old) collection , entitled "A knock on the door in the middle of the night" . Whenever I see a fire, be it in real life or on television, I would tremble in fear and recall an incident that happened a few days ago. It was late at night. I was tossing and turning on my bed as I tried to sleep. At that juncture, I heard a loud banging outside my house. Surprised and bewildered by the thought of whether someone was banging on my door or a burglar trying to break into my house, I went out to investigate. When I opened the door, I saw my neighbour, Aunt Fiona. She was perspiring profusely and was as pale as a ghost . "What is it?" I asked Aunt Fiona. With tears welling in her eyes ...